Rough Draft
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Mu5cX_SZ0UgsGPdZPqC5Yb7RJgUllBukZ-Ryq3cCln8/edit
Final
https://docs.google.com/document/d/169BvjZbwPf4dHA7H_s_kRvWmtJR1dIDx4804QzGVGkc/edit
As I revised I had to make a whole bunch of changes such as, fixing my grammar, punctuation, and other important things. I also corrected my word choice which I needed to improve tremendously and the sentence organization I rearranged to make it flow better. And the final thing I did was elaborating the text and fix my quotes and made them tie into my paper even better.
