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Liberal Arts is a large field that encompasses a wide variety of majors, including literature, psychology, political science, philosophy, and more. If you are an international student who thinks that studying liberal arts in the United States might be for you, read on to learn more about this varied and rewarding field. Jeffrey Scheuer and Sanford Ungar each offer a defense of a liberal arts education for today’s students. For Scheuer, the argument involves introducing several conceptions of the liberal arts, the centrality of dimensions of citizenship, and a case for critical thinking. Ungar engages in a kind of myth-busting by organizing his points as responses to “misperceptions.” The “Core Handbook” introduces the CAS core values as well as the general curriculum required of all students in the college. Together, these texts open a space for us to make sense of the purpose of a liberal arts education in the context of our actual curriculum.  

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When applying for school where you looking to earn a degree that can prepare you for a wide variety of fields? Try considering a liberal arts education. The knowledge and skills you will gain with this kind of degree are valuable in any place you go, and they can prepare you to succeed in a career. Liberal Arts is a large field that encompasses a wide variety of majors, including literature, psychology, political science, philosophy, and more. Jeffrey Scheuer and Sanford Ungar each offer a defense of a liberal arts education for today’s students. For Scheuer, the argument involves introducing several conceptions of the liberal arts, the centrality of dimensions of citizenship, and a case for critical thinking. Ungar engages in a kind of myth-busting by organizing his points as responses to “misperceptions.” The “Core Handbook” introduces the CAS core values which states that students should explore four college-wide themes from multiple disciplinary perspectives and to develop important intellectual skills, as well as the general curriculum required of all students in the college. Together, these texts open a space for us to make sense of the purpose of a liberal arts education in the context of our actual curriculum. And the best part about it is that it will always need to be there and will never get outdated.

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